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chapter one
The birds tweeted and fluttered about, and sometimes two will be sitting on a branch with one mounted on the other. It was May -- mating season. Yeah, that's what they were doing.
A blonde lioness crept up towards a wildebeest, determination in her blue-green eyes. It took a few minutes, but finally she lounged, lashing out at the gray animal with sharp white claws. It's dying screams echoed through the land.
Dragging her kill away quickly, the lion would take a quick look around. Mating season brought so many challengers to her home, making her father and uncle very hard workers during this time of year.
Seeing no unfamiliar male lions, she took off running, surprisingly strong for three hundred pound prey.
She climbed the rocks and came to a cave, dropping her prey and peeking inside.
"Ma? Pa? I'm home!" She called.
A dark brown lion with a scar over his eye emerged.
"Well done, Khalfani." He said in a dark tone, before going to have his share of the carcass.
"Thank you, Father." Khalfani replied before scanning the shadows.