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A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Regulus » May 12th, 2013, 2:45 am

That was the idea. :)

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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Regulus » May 19th, 2013, 1:54 am

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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Dark Huntress » May 19th, 2013, 2:19 am

Wow! That was awesome! I didn't notice anything wrong with it at all!
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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Regulus » May 19th, 2013, 4:35 am

It's mainly just laziness on my part. I wanted to get this chapter over and done with so I can move on with the rest of the story, and as a result, I've kinda neglected it a bit.

If it isn't that noticeable, though, I'm okay with that. :P
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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby cleargreenwater » May 19th, 2013, 3:30 pm

A little chaotic reading chapter, but quite acceptable writing-treatment of hyenas :P
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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Regulus » May 19th, 2013, 9:45 pm

I've been trying to decide whether or not to have the hyenas appear again, in later chapters. I'm still not sure yet, but it's always a possibility. If I do, I will certainly use the opportunity to explain the story from their point of view.
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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby cleargreenwater » May 22nd, 2013, 3:41 am

LOL, no, I didn't mean it like that. Nah, by the time I read up to chapter 12 like that I'm pretty sure to check back in on it regardless of future plot points and if it has hyenas in it :P I just approach fan-writers by how they handle subtleties of characterization, it seemed like a good time to chime in that your fic doesn't read like someone smashing action figures together and writing about it XD
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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Regulus » May 22nd, 2013, 4:57 am

Well, thanks, I guess. :P

But really, that scene with the hyenas was one thing I had to add in there, right from day one. This entire story itself is a prequel to the events in TLK, so it certainly wouldn't be out of place to explore that conflict a bit further. Either way, the outcome is the same.
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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Regulus » May 26th, 2013, 2:40 am

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Re: A Kingdom Reborn: The Legend of Mohatu

Postby Dark Huntress » May 29th, 2013, 4:42 pm

Sorry! Busy week! Wow, it was sappy :D but necessary. Is she really gay, 'cuz that'd kinda piss me off, or is she lying. Anyway, well done, awesomely interesting. (Sorry for short assessment-kinda busy, hehe)
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