Zira's Goodbye to Scar

[LilTiger]

Scar’s body hit the ground with a thud. Then he got up. Hyenas came. Ahhhhh, my friends, Scar said. Friends, I thought you said we were the enemy, Shenzi said. Yeah, that’s what I heard, Ed, Banzi said. Ed laughed. Then more hyenas’ came. No please you don’t understand please no I beg of you, Scar said. Then all the hyenas jumped on him and attacked. A few minutes later, lionesses came and attacked the hyenas. The hyenas left. The lioness who was Scar’s mate was Zira. Scar, Scar, wake up. ”˜Zira, I love you.’ ”˜I love you too Scar’. ”˜Daddy are you going to be okay’? ”˜Nuka, take care of your mother.’ Zira?’ ”˜Yes Scar?’ ”˜Make Kovu the heir, and Vitani.’ ”˜Yes daddy?’ ”˜I love you.’ ”˜I love you to daddy.’ Zira’s eyes were filled with tears. Then, Scar took his final breath, and died. When Scar died, Zira heard a roar. ”˜Simba…’ Then Zira and her cubs ran to find her old friend, Baridi, for comfort.

I own Baridi.
Disney owns the rest of the characters.

[KiarasMate]

Well, for being really really short, it was a very nicely written story of sorts LilTiger. ^^ I really like how you had so much emotion packed in just a few sentences. ^^ I hope you will expand this story further and keep up the awesome work my friend. ^^

[LilTiger]

Thank you! I have another story I'm working on. It's about Scar's reign. It's rather long.

[Buffy]

Very emotional. With Scar's attitude in the movie, it would have been hard to believe he said that he loved someone.
But everyone has a soft side, right?

Like KM said, you filled it with alot of emotion in the few sentences that the story was made of and I would love to see you expand it. It would be very emotional.

Also, I cannot wait to read your new one!

[KiarasMate]

[quote="LilTiger"]Thank you! I have another story I'm working on. It's about Scar's reign. It's rather long.[/quote]

You're most welcome my friend. ^^ Looking forward to reading your new story as well.

[CommandoTheLion]

wow that was awesome alot of Emotion there good one cant wait for more

[KopsTheTerminator]

Wow. This was so emotional! Poor Zira! I hate the hyenas.

[CommandoTheLion]

[quote="Kopa23"]Wow. This was so emotional! Poor Zira! I hate the hyenas. [/quote]

hmmmm yeah i hate Hyenas too -.- so annoying.

[KopsTheTerminator]

Well, I don't believe that Zira and the Outsiders were there, because they would help Scar on the battle. But it's good as a fan-fiction.

[CommandoTheLion]

hmm yeah.