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An Unexpected Visit

PostPosted: September 4th, 2011, 5:31 am
by Baya
(OOT: I'm gone, don't want my work to be on this site.)

Re: An Unexpected Visit

PostPosted: October 9th, 2011, 9:48 pm
by Woeler
Great job! I would really like to see you write a story with multiple chapters. I so love your style!

Re: An Unexpected Visit

PostPosted: October 10th, 2011, 3:38 am
by Kopalover
Great job! :3
I love the way you write fan fiction, and how he acts like Scar. :3 Though he is his son, :3
:D

Re: An Unexpected Visit

PostPosted: December 12th, 2011, 1:52 am
by Kina
I never commented on this? O.o

Shame on me!

I do enjoy Mrithi's smooth personality and the way you've written him in general. He takes after Scar, while still being an individual. The apple doesn't fall far from the tree in this case, though. I am curious of the nature of his and Baya's obvious agreement, though.