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In this RP poem, Mufasa mourns for Scar after he dies in their final fight. No bashing or flaming please.
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A King Mourns


Brother

You could have been great

Instead, you gave into

Your hate and rage

Farewell

You who I called brother

In these acts

You brought grief

To our father and mother

Who would flame this? This is quite good

I put that message on every story that I write, but thanks for the comment.