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Zira's Message (RP Poem)

PostPosted: July 14th, 2011, 5:51 pm
by KingKovu44
Finally, a poem from one of the Outlander's POV. No bashing or flaming please.
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Zira’s Message


Simba

Son of Mufasa

King of Pride Rock

My nephew

The bane of my existence

Know that I will bring you down

Your family will be taken

Before your very eyes

Be prepared

It will happen soon

In Scar’s name

I curse you

Re: Zira's Message (RP Poem)

PostPosted: July 14th, 2011, 10:47 pm
by changa
Dark. Thanks for doing one about her!

Re: Zira's Message (RP Poem)

PostPosted: July 14th, 2011, 10:57 pm
by KingKovu44
Thanks. I think this is actually one of the darkest things I've ever written.

Re: Zira's Message (RP Poem)

PostPosted: July 30th, 2011, 6:10 am
by Thegeni99
"In Scar's name, I curse you." That is so freaking dark! I love this poem, thank you for writing it. Many people don't write from her POV.

Re: Zira's Message (RP Poem)

PostPosted: July 30th, 2011, 1:52 pm
by KingKovu44
Thanks, Geni. After several pieces of Simba/Nala love poetry, it was time for this.

Re: Zira's Message (RP Poem)

PostPosted: August 16th, 2011, 12:06 am
by Maleficent
Wow! This is nice! I love things from Zira's POV. I have to say that the last two lines were my favorite. xD

Re: Zira's Message (RP Poem)

PostPosted: August 16th, 2011, 12:12 am
by KingKovu44
Thanks. This was the darkest thing I've ever written.

Re: Zira's Message (RP Poem)

PostPosted: August 16th, 2011, 12:14 am
by Maleficent
I liked it a lot! Dark can be good for something different, you know? And it certainly fits Zira.

Re: Zira's Message (RP Poem)

PostPosted: August 16th, 2011, 12:15 am
by KingKovu44
I agree. Thanks.