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The Young NLQ'S Story Part 2

PostPosted: May 12th, 2009, 8:03 pm
by NalaLionQueen
When Young Lion Cubby NLQ Ran Away From The Pridelands She Started To Live Her Own Life In The Outlands Where Was So Dirty And Nothing In There Just Fleas. Many Years Later NLQ Was A Adult Lioness She Was Doing What She Wanted One Night When NLQ Was Walking Around The Outlands A Strange Lion Cam And Asked " Why Hello There What Are You Doing In This Land" He Asked. NLQ Anserwed " I Ran Away From The Pridelands & Why Are You Asking Me That Phe Like You Knowed Me. And Besides WHO ARE YOU!!!" Said NLQ. The Lion Anserwed " Im The Last Outlander In This Land" He Said Then NLQ Started A Life Whit Him. NLQ Said " By The Way What's Your Name?" Asked NLQ & He Anserwed " Im Kioshi " He Said She Hited Back " Kioshi?? I Never Heard That Name. But Its Cool" They Lived Their Life In The Outlands

To Be Continued.......

P.S The Character Will Be In My MLKFAA

Re: The Young NLQ'S Story Part 2

PostPosted: May 12th, 2009, 8:10 pm
by Panda-chan
Um.... NLQ? Wouldn't it be easier if you just fitted both parts of your story into one topic? It's kind of a waste of space... :ehh2:

Re: The Young NLQ'S Story Part 2

PostPosted: May 13th, 2009, 6:25 am
by Moka
Yes, please do that. It also makes it easier on your readers so they're not searching the forum for the next part of your story. ;)

Re: The Young NLQ'S Story Part 2

PostPosted: May 13th, 2009, 11:00 am
by NalaLionQueen
Ok. Besides 3 part is last part now

Re: The Young NLQ'S Story Part 2

PostPosted: May 16th, 2009, 4:43 am
by KiarasMate
Another good part to your story here NLQ. ^^ Hoping that you'll expand a bit on the characters and events but still, well done as always. ^^