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dont judge someone by there past or family (pg or pg-13)

PostPosted: May 6th, 2011, 12:31 am
by ArroShadowLion
good vs evil was the way but one never understond it. kovu, he grew up alone. zira and scar killed by simba for killing his mother, father and son kopa. vatani and nuka left kovu because he was to young to walk far. left with the pack kovu grew up alone not knowing who to go to. one day while exploreing he met a young cub named kira. he thought it was love at first sight, when kira brought kovu him with her simba rejected him and said he was evil a out lander. but that was not true, he told simba he was a rouge and always alone. he asked for judgement, so simba gave him a chance.
a week later kovu and kira where playing in the feild when hyenas came. zazu flew as fast as he could to simba. kovu protected kira but when simba got there, kovu embarked the scar of his father. the next morning simba decided to judge kovu and he was brought in to the pride lands. from then on everything seemd well, but the evil ones are planing something.

(three years later) kovu and kira are married and had a cub one year ago. kira named it after her murdered brother kopa. later that day the sky went dark and the wind was blowing hard. it was thundering but not raining, the outlanders came in to the pride lands, then it was on. NOW IT IS WAR!!!!!!!! simba said. simba told kira to stay out of it and kovu to make sure she doesnt get hurt. when kovu looked out in to the battle feild he was suprised to see vatani and nuka there. nukas termintes have gone away and is now healthy. right now so far the out landers are wining, the battle is bloody. nuka and vatani escape the battle and sneak there way to kovu and kira. vatani: kovu how could you betray us, nuka: yea, kovu: you left me to die , vatani: we went to find if mom and dad where really alive. kovu: it doesnt matter this is my home now. kovu jumps and attacks nuka then vatani joines in. kopa: ya ya!!!!!!!! get em daddy, show em whos boss!!!. vatani leaves the fight and rubs rocks together and makes fire. she throws the fire in to the pride lands. simba fights his way to kovu and kira, but vatani stops him from helping kovu. vatani slashes simba across the face and throws him close to the fire. all of a sudden zira comes out. kovu: your not dead, zira: no kovu IM NOT!, i was in hideing and now i will finish them off. kovu jumps on zira makeing here almost fall off of pride rock, kovu becomes over ragded with anger and throw his brother in to the fire killing him. zira gets back up and is furiouse. zira: kovu how could you , you killed your own brother. kovu: you wanted me to follow in scars foot prints so i did, he killed his opisite in nature brother so i killed mine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
simba kills vatani and jumps up in front of zira, the slide off of pride rock handing on for there lives :x . zira loses gripe but then grabs on to simba. he has no chioce to let go to kill zira. he lets go and it starts to rain. the fire goes out and the out landers lost. simba, nuka, vatani, and zira are dead.

what happens next. read the next one to find out.


this was my first fan fic how do you think it was ;)





chapter 2
one sunny morning one year old kopa decides to go out and play. as he chases a butter fly, when he sees the bushes moveing. so kopa goes cheaks it out, he sees a young black lion. kopa: um hi, the black cub jumps back in fright but only sees another cub
still thinking of more

Re: dont judge someone by there past or family (pg or pg-13)

PostPosted: May 6th, 2011, 12:35 am
by TheLionQueen
Don't you mean fan fic not rp lol Arro

Re: dont judge someone by there past or family (pg or pg-13)

PostPosted: May 7th, 2011, 10:18 pm
by Daenerys
I can't even read it there is so many typing errors

Re: dont judge someone by there past or family (pg or pg-13)

PostPosted: May 14th, 2011, 10:44 pm
by TheLionQueen
Yeah I know I know Arro in real life and she can't spell for anything and she is one of those dumb blond's, No offense Arro you know I love you like my own sister

Re: dont judge someone by there past or family (pg or pg-13)

PostPosted: May 14th, 2011, 10:47 pm
by Panda-chan
You don't need to use so many exclamation points. And the hundreds of typos and punctuation errors kind of detract from the entire thing...

Re: dont judge someone by there past or family (pg or pg-13)

PostPosted: May 15th, 2011, 12:27 am
by TheLionQueen
I love your avatar Amanda POPTART KITTY!
LOL! :lol:

Re: dont judge someone by there past or family (pg or pg-13)

PostPosted: May 16th, 2011, 1:10 am
by Daenerys
That doesn't have anything to do with the subject.

Anyway, yes I agree with you Amanda. Why so many exclamation points?

Re: dont judge someone by there past or family (pg or pg-13)

PostPosted: May 17th, 2011, 4:57 am
by TheLionQueen
Arro you need to word on your darn grammar spelling and when to use certain sentence enderthingys(forgot what there called) *rolls eyes at self* OH and Arro Call me later I had to tell you something
BTW(my computer is acting slow so I don't feel like going to my profile clicking all that stuff then typeing.I sound very lazy)

Re: dont judge someone by there past or family (pg or pg-13)

PostPosted: May 18th, 2011, 10:48 pm
by ArroShadowLion
ugh i dont like when people tell me all the problems ok i dont pay attetion in school but i still get all As and i dont have the typeing class any more im always told that im doing everything wrong and rachle im not blond im dark diry blond and my hair is turning brown for some reason

Re: dont judge someone by there past or family (pg or pg-13)

PostPosted: May 18th, 2011, 10:54 pm
by Daenerys
XD, Lol that was random.