[quote]Zazu flew above everyone, watching every move everyone made. He kept his eyes (?) for anyone 'uninvited'. He watched as all the animals leave. Zazu flew down to kovu and bowed. "Everything is in order, We haven't any inturders." Then he set out to watch as all the animals leave. He than glanced apon the border and saw a lion lost and wandering in the pridelands. He aproched him, but he dident reconise him. The lion kept walking tierd alone and lost. He needed to find a pride so he can get help and finaly wind his way back home.[/quote]
(OOC: I'm not usually bothered about spelling and grammar, but come on. I know you may only be 13, but I'm 14 and I was doing the same quality of posts last year as I am now. I'm going to correct this and I know I may sound harsh...but I really do need people who can spell to enjoy what I'm doing. I suggest running your posts through a spell checker )
[quote]Zazu flew above everyone, watching every move everyone made. He kept his eyes open for anyone 'uninvited'. He watched as all the animals left. Zazu flew down to Kovu and bowed. "Everything is in order, We haven't any intruders." Then he set out to watch as all the animals leave. (OOC: Didn't he just do that?) He than glanced upon the border and saw a lion, lost and wondering in the Pridelands. He approached him, but he didn't recognize him. The lion kept walking tired, alone and lost. He needed to find a pride so he could get help and finally find his way back home. [/quote]