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Kopa's fate a poem

PostPosted: October 28th, 2010, 4:46 pm
by dariusgib
Hi guys 8-) read before this before poem this is a poetic adaptation to a theroy by LeoLion0818

i hope you enjoy this poem

Kopa's fate



On that summers day

when Scar had been denounced

the evil Zira on that day

was guranteed a pounce



Simba had a son

Kopa was his name

This son was guranteed

To bring his elder no shame



Zira invited Kopa

On Vitanis play date

Simba not knowing

He had sealed his fate



Simba while there

Saw two friends at play

But while absent he had

Let blood flow that day



Vitani had slashed

Till she began to tire

Her slash across his face

Gave no mull of Kintyre



Zira had said

That buggers got to swing

She ordered the execution

Of that bleeding little thing



To the elephant graveyard

Nuka left him to die

Then the hyenas saw him

Dying where he lied



There they slashed

Tilll mother father saw

The evil execution

Of a sick sadistic lore



They hacked and tore at them

When they saw his life was shun

Till the hyena Shenzi said

Ziras work has been done



Simba confronted Zira

With a patience very thin

But all that shon acorss her face

Was a bright and cheery grin

Re: Kopa's fate a poem

PostPosted: October 28th, 2010, 8:45 pm
by Panda-chan
Umm, I don't think he would appreciate you putting his personal e-mail on this forum, or posting his poem without permission.

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Re: Kopa's fate a poem

PostPosted: October 29th, 2010, 9:49 am
by dariusgib
sorry i dont know what your talking about

Re: Kopa's fate a poem

PostPosted: October 29th, 2010, 9:50 am
by dariusgib
if your talking about Leo im sure hes ok with it

Re: Kopa's fate a poem

PostPosted: October 29th, 2010, 10:10 pm
by SuperBabySimba
1.) Shouldn't this be in the FanFiction board of this discussion forum and not on this discussion board?
2.) That was VERY brutal story.
3.) Which leads into even less sense for Simba to just exile Zira than the basic theory in itself already makes. If that btutal death had really happened Simba would've totally killed Zira and the hyenas too.

As it is, Zira didn't really kill Kopa as Kopa never existed in the same universe as Zira. But nice try. (:

Re: Kopa's fate a poem

PostPosted: October 29th, 2010, 10:27 pm
by Panda-chan
[quote="dariusgib"]if your talking about Leo im sure hes ok with it[/quote]
Have you asked him? Does he even know you're posting this?

EDIT: @SBS exactly -.-'

Re: Kopa's fate a poem

PostPosted: October 30th, 2010, 10:29 am
by dariusgib
ok to simbas mate as a said this is not my theroy this si somones elses i disagreed with it in some cases but i like it thought to a turned into a poem also you said i should of put it in the fan fiction board. at the time i missed that and i thought beyond the lion king was it
and also you say he would of killed zira
but didnt in the LK he says to scar
no im not like you
so wouldnt this also work for not killing Zira to not be like her
Also why are they not in the same universe they are both LK character
also to amanda i just wanted some fun i havent asked him i tried to but i didnt have yahoo ive got rid of his email ok
i hope that ok with you now sorry for offending

Re: Kopa's fate a poem

PostPosted: October 30th, 2010, 10:48 am
by KopsTheTerminator
This isn't yours. You can't copy or use other people's creations just like that. :/ And this doesn't even belong in this section.. It's not canon or semi-canon, it's a theory.

Re: Kopa's fate a poem

PostPosted: October 30th, 2010, 2:22 pm
by SuperBabySimba
[quote="dariusgib"]and also you say he would of killed zira
but didnt in the LK he says to scar
no im not like you
so wouldnt this also work for not killing Zira to not be like her[/quote]

No, it wouldn't. The not-to-be-like-you isn't about killing in general. It is about WHO to kill.
- Not to be like Scar meant not to kill a family member as Scar had murdered his own brother, Simba's father. His blood tie to Simba kept Simba from killing him in revenge and sentence of his father's murder.
- Regarding your theory Zira is a child murderer who killed Simba's child, so not to be like Zira would mean not to kill a child. But Zira isn't a child and he isn't known to be even Simba's blood relation. Nothing would keep Simba from killing her in revenge and sentence of his child's murder.

Simba would've totally killed Zira if Zira had killed his son. But she never killed a son that never existed.

[quote="dariusgib"]Also why are they not in the same universe they are both LK character[/quote]

Because there are two sub-universes in the general TLK universe; the book universe and the movie universe. While Zira is never ever even mentioned in any of the books in the book universe, especially not in the ones wherein Kopa exists, and Kopa is never ever even mentioned in the movie universe. Resulting in that they don't exist in the same universe with each other. Also, the book universe is evidently made of several different stories which contents contradict each others, including the content of the Six New Adventures books. Resulting in the book universe being a collection of seperate fanfiction stories not meant as semi-canon to the mmovie universe.

That's a cold fact you can not get rid off except in your day dreams.

PS. If this poem isn't written by you and you haven't got the writer's permission to publish this, you'd do well editing the post and just have a link to wherever its rightful author posted it and keeping the credits clear. And then ask one of the moderators of this forum to move this topic into the Links section. (:

Re: Kopa's fate a poem

PostPosted: October 30th, 2010, 3:14 pm
by dariusgib
oK I agree with the Zira pint but if you think about it Simba was scared for life by his fathers death dont you think Simba would not kill her because she has children
alos I WROTE THIS POEM
the theroy is not mine as i have said before i do not agree with the theroy i just like it so thought it would be good as a poem im sorry if im boring you by saying these morals simba has to not kill Zira but what do you want me to say
Also yes i do come to turns they both come from different fictions but i have read all over and in fan art that people like to believe Zira killed Kopa im sorry if youve heard this before
i hope i answered your question