by TheWhistlerify » October 9th, 2014, 7:01 pm
Congrats, Julie! Your piece was written beautifully, as always according to what I've read by you. You carried out the whole emotional aspect wonderfully (the whole oneshot was hurt/comfort themed, so that's obviously a good thing).
Oh, Yoni, Yoni, Yoni... Your entry definitely does have traces of hasty writing. I wouldn't have guessed that it was yours hadn't I recognized Julie's writing style and brought the fact that you always enter into consideration. And that's saying a lot, because I've RPed with you for, eh... over 3 years. But, then again, you said you did write it at the last minute so that there would be more than one entry, therefore I'm assuming you weren't planning on participating this time around. :p