My Lion King Forum

Hey! This should probably help with it.

Title: A Battle To Show Ourselves (working title)

Synopsis: In the midst of the Pridelands and Outlands, there are two lions who can't seem to fit in. Tivana, a dark looking Pridelander who was born in the Outlands, and Shari, a rough lion just trying to show Zira that he is better than Kovu. Meeting each other was fate in an awkward way, but just how they seemed to meet was a choice. They battled their own battles together with each other. Even helping some lions along the way.

Characters:

Tivana: Me

Shari: Simba66

Tuva: Me

Sneak Peek: (Or what I have now )

"Tivana, why doesn't any of the lions like you?" Tuva asked as he laid in Tivana's arms under Priderock. Tivana looked at him, before finishing up with cleaning his little tuft of fur on his head.

"It's a long story Tuva. Basically, I don't belong here. I was born an Outlander, but brought here to live in the Pride." She explained. Tuva looked up at his half-sister.

"Does that mean I'm an Outlander too?" He exclaimed. Tivana chuckled.

"No little one. You were born and raised in the Pridelands, therefore you are a Pridelander. That's why Shari and I don't fit in. You'll understand one day." Tivana told him. Tuva chuckled, before getting up and heading up the long steps to the cave. Tivana smiled, before looking out toward the setting sun. She wondered if Shari was looking the same way, thinking the same thing.

If you want to add any ideas or a new title, then just tell me. Can't wait to start this.

I think this is a solid story. But tell me, where does the story initially begin? Before Shari and Tivana meet, or after?

I think it would start before they met, like why they are outcasts in their prides. I'm probably gonna make Tivana take Tuva down to the watering hole for some practice on his pouncing. I want them to meet and even though they hate each other for a while, they will soon grow to like each other and become more than their tribes could handle.

Alright. Solid. But these things take time. Let's start this asap and see where it takes us.

Already started in the private rps, cant wait

I will post in a bit. Just gotta do my chores.

Alright. I'll be waiting