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April 24th, 2010, 4:57 pm
by Nakisisa
Hey guys,
I'm I'm a planning mode for some fan fics I am planning to write (first. Ones) and I need your ideas on the italicized sentence as a overview/theme for the FF.
Thank
Naki
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On The Day I Die,
The World Will Quake,
The Mountains Will Fall
And The Sun Awake.
The Rain Will Come,
Cleansing The Land Of These Sins,
The Light Will Return,
On The Beat Of Golden Wings.
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OK it sounds like poetry, but I quite like it, suggestions please, also what do you think the Fan Fic will be about, just from reading that?
Naki
Re: Untitled

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April 24th, 2010, 4:59 pm
by Wereberess
If it's TLK related it i think it'll be about Simba's death and Kovu's rise. Or Scar's death hencing the "Cleansing of the lands"
Re: Untitled

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April 24th, 2010, 5:06 pm
by Nakisisa
Sorry i should have said, it will be a TLK Fan Fic, but i am thinking of merging it with another idea, which i have taken from an RP i tried to create on another site. It was called "The Power Of Pride" this is the original idea for that fic, Again i may merge them together but then again i may write two fics on them
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(This is part of the original RP text, i cant find the RP Planning text i saved)
What would have happened if Scar threatened to kill all the cubs from Mufasa's reign under an old law? What would have happened if Simba ran away after Mufasa's death with other cubs from pride rock? What would have happened if the runaway cubs started their own pride away from the pridelands? What would happen to them if they ever returned?
The cubs being inexperienced would have found life difficult, at this point they would be adolescents and Scar would have been king a few months. For this to happen the cubs would have crossed over the border and carried on for several days, catching prey as they went looking for their new home.
Meanwhile back at pride rock, what would have Scar done at the thought of Simba still being king, what would he tell the lionesses? And what would he do now things had gone down a different route?
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April 24th, 2010, 5:38 pm
by Wereberess
[quote="Nakisisa"]Sorry i should have said, it will be a TLK Fan Fic, but i am thinking of merging it with another idea, which i have taken from an RP i tried to create on another site. It was called "The Power Of Pride" this is the original idea for that fic, Again i may merge them together but then again i may write two fics on them
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(This is part of the original RP text, i cant find the RP Planning text i saved)
What would have happened if Scar threatened to kill all the cubs from Mufasa's reign under an old law? What would have happened if Simba ran away after Mufasa's death with other cubs from pride rock? What would have happened if the runaway cubs started their own pride away from the pridelands? What would happen to them if they ever returned?
The cubs being inexperienced would have found life difficult, at this point they would be adolescents and Scar would have been king a few months. For this to happen the cubs would have crossed over the border and carried on for several days, catching prey as they went looking for their new home.
Meanwhile back at pride rock, what would have Scar done at the thought of Simba still being king, what would he tell the lionesses? And what would he do now things had gone down a different route?[/quote]
...You want me to answer these questions?
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April 24th, 2010, 5:40 pm
by Nakisisa
you can if you want, but that was the idea behind a failed RP, anyways, i was thinking of turning it into a fan fic, so theming it with the first post would work, I think. who knows i may completely overwrite the whole idea
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April 24th, 2010, 5:48 pm
by Wereberess
[quote="Wereberess"][quote="Nakisisa"]Sorry i should have said, it will be a TLK Fan Fic, but i am thinking of merging it with another idea, which i have taken from an RP i tried to create on another site. It was called "The Power Of Pride" this is the original idea for that fic, Again i may merge them together but then again i may write two fics on them
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(This is part of the original RP text, i cant find the RP Planning text i saved)
What would have happened if Scar threatened to kill all the cubs from Mufasa's reign under an old law? (The lionesses probably wouldn't let him do that. I believe they'd fight to the death if he tried to kill their cubs. Lionesses do that in real life if they can get to the cubs before the male does.)What would have happened if Simba ran away after Mufasa's death with other cubs from pride rock?(They would've grew up together, Simba as the leader, with T&P and once Simba had his "Remeber who your are" moment the coalition would've took back pride rock.) What would have happened if the runaway cubs started their own pride away from the pridelands? What would happen to them if they ever returned?(answered those two)
The cubs being inexperienced would have found life difficult, at this point they would be adolescents and Scar would have been king a few months. For this to happen the cubs would have crossed over the border and carried on for several days, catching prey as they went looking for their new home.
Meanwhile back at pride rock, what would have Scar done at the thought of Simba still being king, what would he tell the lionesses?(That he(Simba) gave up the chance to be king when he ran away.) And what would he do now things had gone down a different route?(Use the hyenas. They seem pretty persuasive)[/quote]
...You want me to answer these questions?[/quote]
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April 24th, 2010, 8:52 pm
by Nakisisa
Fair enough, good answers