My Lion King Forum

Here's an exclucive sneek peek of my story "Scar's Reign"

“Better watch out Sarafina”, Zira said. “Zira”, Hisani called. “I have to talk to you, tonight, or now if you want”, Hisani said. “Now”, Zira said. Hisani got all the lionesses out of the cave. It started to thunder. “Now, do you remember who killed your pride”, Hisani asked. “Yes, that black- mane two face toad”, Zira said. “Well, there’s a lioness in this pride that is his daughter”. “Who”, Zira asked. “I am, my father killed your pride”, Hisani said. “Why”, because that’s the way my father was”, Hisani said. ”˜You”……., Zira said. They started to fight. And she soon killed Hisani. A few months past and Zira soon found out that she was expecting a cub. She soon had to cub. It was a girl. It looked just like Baridi……

Oh wow! That was cool! Keep writing, I can't wait to read more of this story!

Your welcome! Here's another sneek peek

“Well, it’s not your fault; after all, your half brother caused this mess”, Zira said. “What do you mean”, Amari asked. “Well, one day, there was a stampede in the gorge, because Simba started it , Mufasa and Simba died, it was all your half brother’s fault that this place is like this, of his disgrace, we sometimes call this place Shadowland”, Zira replied. “But why would he do that”, Amari asked. “Because, and if you tell your mother or Laini what I told you, you will be in big trouble”, Zira said. Then, her claws snapped out. “Zira, why are your claws out”, Amari asked. “So long, brat”, Zira said.

Ouch! Still a cool story. Though, I'm still not sure who the other characters are, set aside from Zira. But I still love how this is written! ^^

Well, Laini is my version of Scar and Sarabi's daughter. And Amari is the son of Sarabi and Kahumba, who will not apper in the story. And Hisani is the "faked" sister of Zira.

Sounds like this will be an interesting story once you get it done LilTiger. ^^ Looking forward to reading more of it when you post it. ^^ Might wanna have this thread moved to that new Planning section though, since it seems like it would be appropriate for that area.

Exciting story, Tiger! You sure enjoy writing!
Cannot wait to read more of it!

Your welcome.
Everone, I have good news!
I'M ALMOST DONE WITH THE STORY!!!!!!!!!
It should be up in 24 hours.

Ooh! I cannot wait!

I know! Me either!(I'm the one who writes it! I have to think of outstanding things)