My Lion King Forum

So this is my very first fan fiction. i'm really good at some, but this is new to me. You'll just have to bear with me. This is only in the making, so I would like constructive critism, but not horrible critism please. This takes place in LK before SP


Synopsis

Nala has just found Simba in the jungle and they reunite. Everyone thinks they were best friends for the longest time, and were in love. But what happens when an old friend of Simba's back in his cubhood comes back after her family's exile? She loves him, but Nala loves Simba, and Simba can't decide. Who will he choose?


Not the best synopsis but it's good enough. Basically I have an original family of mine that was sent into exile when Marina (my Oc) was just a cub, now she's back and finds SImba, but sees he loves Nala, and she wants him for herself.


So what do you guys think? It's in the making, so it won't be too good. My Ocs are Riyul, Evina, and Marina, the family sent into exile. I'll put them in the original character forum if anyone wants to see them.

thanks, and if you have i dont want to takle the same from you it would make me feel bad

btw: I love your signature and your avatar. I am in love with How To Train Your Dragon!!!

well thanks. I'm sure it won't be like yours at least i hope

and i just requested one, i hope it won't be too bad.

Very interesting... I'm actually looking forward to it!