lyrics

lyrics

Postby jelle » May 20th, 2012, 6:11 pm

Hey. i don't know if anyone knows but music is a big passion of mine and i also write songs(i play guitar and stuff) and i really enjoy writing lyrics.
so i was like why not share some on MLK.
warning: all fictional and can be quite shocking or hard since they are heavy metal lyrics


I'm not a guy who can forget these feelings
Like a minute in an hour
I’m not a guy to guide
Not a strong guy to fight

I want to cry but there are no tears
What can I do to give up these fears
I’m bleeding and my hatred comes alive
I am alone in this dark night

But my regrets are useless
My intention to live, clueless
This is a black day of my life
But I was wrong
Those were not the arms where I belong

Life is a treasure
Love is a lie
Live without you
What can I do

But my regrets are useless
My intention to live, clueless
This is a black day of my life
I blame my feelings
To find an answer to the question
I’m turning back to the sentence of my life

Life is a treasure
Love is a lie
Live without you
What can I do

I want to cry but there are no tears
What can I do to give up these fears
I’m bleeding and my hatred comes alive
I am alone in this dark night

I want to cry but there are no tears
What can I do to give up these fears
I’m bleeding and my hatred comes alive
I am alone this night


you guys can figure out what it is about XD
feedback and tips etc are appreciated :)
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Re: lyrics

Postby SophieCub » May 20th, 2012, 10:11 pm

Awesome! I love it! You should sing it and record it or just play the tune on guitar for us to hear. ^^
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Re: lyrics

Postby Vector » May 21st, 2012, 12:52 am

Yeah, your gf ditched you... Nice job making the song though!

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Re: lyrics

Postby jelle » May 21st, 2012, 2:56 pm

sophie: THANKS i just would love to record it but i have no way to i am saving up for a recorder though :3

vector: haha true but i never really make personal songs^^ but i guess this one became person without me wanting it to be personal i guess or something lolz. and yes i do ^^
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Re: lyrics

Postby Libre » May 21st, 2012, 9:42 pm

This is awesome, dude!
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Re: lyrics

Postby jelle » May 27th, 2012, 10:11 am

thanks libre
i've just completed another song

Going down

Going down (going down)
We are descending
Fasten your seatbelts
And pray for a proper landing

Losing your friends in life
Was the worst of our fears
The plane came crashing down
Onto the glacier of tears

Embrace me
Will you stay with me
Don’t walk a way
Embrace me
Will you stay with me
Erase this day

Deadly silence after the first hit
Not dead but bleeding just a bit
Trying to help my teammates out
The ones who are injured, scream and shout

Who is lost (who is lost)
Search for survivors at all cost
Is there anyone still breathing
Or did they all die by the frost

Embrace me
Will you stay with me
Don’t walk a way
Embrace me
Will you stay with me
Erase this day

No


its about the plane that chrashed in chile into the glacier of tears

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Re: lyrics

Postby SophieCub » May 27th, 2012, 11:34 am

Awesome jelle! Your such a good song writer! Putting me in the mood to start writing songs again. :)
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Re: lyrics

Postby jelle » May 27th, 2012, 11:58 am

haha thanks :3. and yes you should ! :)
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