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Re: the story of my life [ collaborated fiction ]

PostPosted: December 30th, 2013, 3:14 am
by Adofo
58

Tails: How do you know something's wrong?
Kelsey: I just feel....this cold, something that is just pure evil. More evil than anything we've faced.
Sonic: Hmm, I've got a bad feeling about this.
Back in the town of Nzuri, Reed goes back his little sport right outside of town and starts digging something up. A strange looking gun. He heads over to the town's graveyard and digs up Jack's grave. He digs out a coffin and opens it up to find Jack's skeleton.
Reed: Ah, there you are Jack! Let's go get the rest of our new little team!

Re: the story of my life [ collaborated fiction ]

PostPosted: December 31st, 2013, 7:07 pm
by UncoordinatedPisces
(If you don't mind me saying, this isn't really a fanfiction. Its more like an RP. I've never heard of a chapter of a book having only 7 lines.)

Re: the story of my life [ collaborated fiction ]

PostPosted: December 31st, 2013, 9:53 pm
by Kipekee
I don't mind, but the reason why is because he's not that much of a typer as I am.
Thanks for the feedback; we'll try to make the chapters longer!

Re: the story of my life [ collaborated fiction ]

PostPosted: January 1st, 2014, 2:59 am
by Adofo
ME!?!? You're the one that made the first tiny chapter! For a while u did like 3 liners and i still did 12!