SLA Plan Thread

[KingKovu44]

Here's my official planning thread for my story "Star Lion Adventures". I'm working on the first actual chapter and here is a preview of what I have so far:


Chapter 2


A large storm was raging across the skies of Dinosaur Planet. Amidst this weather, a beautiful lioness with pale tan fur and shining blue eyes wearing a golden two-piece outfit soared through the skies on the back of a member of one of the planet’s dinosaur tribes, the winged reptiles called Cloudrunners. Nala had her weapon, a golden staff with wondrous abilities, drawn.

“I received a garbled distress signal. It said something about a mountain hidden in a storm. Whoever they are, they sound in great danger!” she said in Saurian, the language of the dinosaur tribes.

Suddenly, out of nowhere, a fireball streaked across the sky. Nala barely had time to duck and then put her staff away to avoid losing it. Suddenly, a giant flying galleon appeared before the young lioness. Its figurehead was carved in the shape of the head of an Allosaurus. As it passed by, Nala knew what she needed to do.



It's taking time because of real life concerns, but will be ready soon.

[Maleficent]

Wow, really good so far! I like it! And np, I know how that is. Keep going, this is gonna be good! xD

[KingKovu44]

Thanks. I'm trying my best. Hopefully, I'll have it up soon.

[Maleficent]

Well, it's turning out great! I hope you can get it up soon too.

[KingKovu44]

Yeah, the next chapter will have all the stuff with Nala and then the part introducing Simba. I'm also wondering if I should show the part of Simba landing on Dinosaur Planet and meeting Nala in this part.

[Maleficent]

Cool! Yeah, I think you should show the part with Simba, that would be nice.

[KingKovu44]

Yeah, I have a plan for it. Simba is totally distracted by Nala's beauty...